Comments on: “I’m sorry, Matthew”

By: Qazi Saad

Qazi Saad — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 07:04:23 +0000

Hey, very nice story. The way you steadily paced the revelation was very good. It reminded of one of the story i wrote back in 1997,though i am a new writer/blogger. Best of luck for your future.

By: Roy

Roy — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 06:56:08 +0000

testing nested reply

By: WOOF Contest for October 2, 2009 | Zorlone - Filipino Poet and Writer

WOOF Contest for October 2, 2009 | Zorlone - Filipino Poet and Writer — Tue, 06 Oct 2009 01:39:39 +0000

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By: Roy

Roy — Mon, 05 Oct 2009 23:36:51 +0000

thank you very much Jenn!

I am very much elated by your comment

By: jenn

jenn — Mon, 05 Oct 2009 23:03:44 +0000

Roy, All I can say is WOW this is the best short story I read of yours. This is truly an amazing story.

By: Roy

Roy — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 12:09:12 +0000

It’s okay Z, you’re just in time

By: Zorlone

Zorlone — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 10:05:12 +0000

I missed the party!

A little more twist then you got a suspense thriller going on here. Well, that’s just me thinking in my weird way.

There are decisions that we made that would haunt us and there are those that we could learn from, Liza learned hers… with the huge cost. At least she learned.

By: Roy

Roy — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 13:23:06 +0000

hmm… let’s see if I can come up with something…

Thanks!

By: Jena Isle

Jena Isle — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 12:47:47 +0000

If you’re really interested, then sent me through e mail something that has never been published anywhere, on line or offline and I’ll sent it myself with your byline of course, let’s see what they’ll say to it.

By: Roy

Roy — Sun, 27 Sep 2009 23:03:53 +0000

Thanks Holly!

I was very conscious about the plot appearing to be a ‘forcing through’ kind of type. This was a first for me as writing fiction in the first person POV.

I admit that I enjoyed, but somehow, as I experienced it, the character gets into you as well.

Thanks again!