“Are you sure this is the right door?”

“Yes! I’m definitely sure it’s the right door! Go ahead and knock!”

“But you said that on the first two doors too! How sure are you now?

“Hey! The doors all look the same, can you blame me? Now, I’m sure about this one. Do you want to see her or not?!”

Benjie has no choice really, hesitantly he knocks at the door… timidly at first, but it gets aggressive as he knocks some more.

“Looks like nobody’s home”
he said.

“Just keep on knocking,” Vernon prodded him, “I’m sure somebody’s inside.”

Benjie was about to knock again when the door swung open, and in front of them stood a shirtless man in his early 60’s who looks so grumpy and isn’t so happy to see them.

“What is it?!”
he asks.

“Ah, sir… is this the house where Miss Victoria Magabon lives? Here’s a picture of her sir, you might re…”

“Nobody lives here by that name. Now go away, I’m busy!” the man replied without even letting the boy finished, and slams the door close.

“Wow! Talk about grumpy!” Vernon blurted out.

“You said this is the right door! Which one really is it?!” Benjie demanded

“Look,”
Vernon explained, “this is an 8-door apartment row, and they all look the same. My informant said it’s in one of these doors. We’ve been through three, we’ve only five to go, how hard can that be?”

“Geez! Some guys just don’t have any sense of appreciation!” Vernon whispered quite loudly

“What was that?” Benjie asked.

While they were having an argument, the door on the fifth apartment opened, and out came a lady in her late 40’s. Apparently she heard the noise and was wondering what the commotion was all about.

“Excuse me boys,” as she approached them, “I can’t help but hear you two. Is there any problem? Can I help you?”

“Yes ma’m!”
Benjie replied excitedly, “I’m looking for Victoria Magabon, here’s her picture. They said she lives in these apartment, can you tell me which one ma’m?”

The woman looks at the picture and then at the boy.

“My goodness! Don’t tell me… are you Benjamin?”

“Y-yes ma’m. But please call me Benjie”

“My, you’re so big now. How times really fly so fast… look at you!”

“A-Are you Victoria Magabon? Are you my mother?” Benjie asked the woman nervously.

“No, my name is Margaret. I’m a friend of your mother. She used to live in this apartment with me,” the woman replied.

“What do you mean used to?”

“She moved out last week, she heard some people were asking for her. She freaks out whenever she learns of someone looking for her. The wife of one of her customer threatened to have her killed because she claimed your mother destroyed their family,” Margaret explained.

“Can I butt in?” said Vernon, who doesn’t want to be just an audience, “why would his mother destroy other people’s family?”

“You don’t know your mother’s job, do you,”
said Margaret, “she was a prostitute and she goes with every man who fancy her, as long as they can sustain her caprice. It’s not like she wanted it, but she can’t live without the lifestyle she was so accustomed with.”

“My father said she went to live with another man because she can’t give her a luxurious life, he never said about my mother being a prostitute,” Benjie said, holding back the tears in his eyes.

“Aahh… your father is a good man. I can see he raised you well. Your mother would’ve been proud of you”

“So where does she live now?” asked Vernon, “I’m sure you know where we can find her, right? Can you tell us please?”

“I’m sorry, I don’t know”

“What do you mean you don’t know?!” Vernon argues, “Come on, quit playing games with us! You said she’s your friend! Surely, you know where she went!”

“She didn’t tell me. She doesn’t want anyone to know really. The threat that she received has caused her to become paranoid, she doesn’t tell anyone wherever she goes,” Margaret explained.

“I guess there’s nothing we can do now,” Benjie said, as tears finally trickled down his face, “let’s go home Vernon. Thank you for your time ma’m.”

“Wait!” Vernon isn’t about to give up yet, “can we just leave a number? Just in case she comes visiting you, can you at least give her the number? Pleeeease?”

“Yes, I’ll do that,”
said the woman as she gets the piece of paper containing the number from Vernon.

At the road, while Vernon was driving, “That was really a bummer bro! I mean, we were so close! If only we got here a week earlier, we could have caught her.”

Benjie was just silent, his eyes looking out the window…. he was thinking….

“Now, we have to start all over again,” Vernon continues, “and I need to pay more informants again to gather information. But don’t worry bro, even if I use the last of my allowance I’ll find her for you bro. What are we brothers for?”

“There’s something wrong,” Benjie blurted out, “I just can’t put a finger on it…”

Meanwhile, back at the apartment… Margaret is looking at a picture of a baby… she was crying…

“I’m sorry my boy… how I wanted to embrace you, to kiss you… but it’s better that you don’t see me anymore… it’s better this way my son. You’ve grown to be a fine young man…. I’m proud of you… I love you Benjamin… I’m really sorry…”



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20 Responses to “So close…”

  1. Shankha says:

    It’s really a nice touching story to read. Thanks.

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  2. Zorlone says:

    So close indeed!

    I wonder what could happened if Margaret introduced herself properly? More drama? More confusion? hmmm…. I guess that’s left for us to ponder on.

    Interesting story Roy!

    Z

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  3. madz says:

    Oh, so sad ending for the mother and his son. Don’t know why Margaret chooses not to tell him. But I guess Benjie did felt that the woman was his mother.

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  4. Roy says:

    Hi Shanka!

    Thanks for reading!

    Hi Z and madz!
    I’m asking those questions myself, and also wondering why she didn’t introduce herself… questions that even the author couldn’t answer…

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  5. Pasyalera says:

    Whattttt!!!?? Why didn’t she introduce herself? :( So sad…

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    Roy Reply:

    uy! si Pasyalera! salamat napasyal ka sa aking blog :)

    to answer the question… I also don’t know… maybe it’s not yet the time

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  6. Oh, you make me want to cry. So close… he sensed it. But there’s no ending, really, so if I want him to…he’ll figure it out, turn around, and forgive her.

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  7. Roy says:

    thank you very much for appreciating the story Holly…

    who knows? maybe he will… maybe he will…

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  8. reyjr says:

    …why can’t all endings be happy ones? :(

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  10. a.cantos says:

    is there a part two of this?

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    Roy Reply:

    hmm… might be… let’s see…

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  11. jan geronimo says:

    You’re a cruel man, Roy. Such willful display of cruelty.

    The good news is that’s how stories are meant to be written. A writer throws obstacles in his protagonist’s life without mercy. Left and right. No breathing room. Or just maybe there are, but only to terrify the hero into thinking, “What more lies ahead? What more misfortunes await me.”

    Such is the stuff that drives good stories. We give our hero hell. We punish him. We don’t treat them like pampered guests.

    Pretty much life. And in fiction as in life the author chuckles, “I never promised you a rose garden, did I.”

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    Roy Reply:

    hahaha! thanks for the compliment Jan hehe…

    sadistic, isn’t it? quite unfair… just like life…

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  12. jan geronimo says:

    My turn to say. Wait, it should have been written, “Pretty much like life….”

    Ah well, I couldn’t resist it, Roy.

    Can I go now without saying I love your story? I implied it in so many words. I just want to be unequivocal about it now. I love it! :)

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    Roy Reply:

    you’re a master of words Jan. you can express what you mean without saying the exact word ;)

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  13. ceblogger says:

    still trying to figure it out. why didn’t Benjie recognize her?

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    Roy Reply:

    I was asking that question myself after writing the story Novz….

    perhaps there were changes… big changes…

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  14. joe yabuki says:

    hmm..its very sad story, sometime a mother doesn’t want to make her son upset about what she did..sometimes it can make her son embarrassment about his mother’s job as prostitute..

    btw, nice story..

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  15. Andrix Lim says:

    Wow….absolutely amazing. An extremely touching story, with a hint of angst…..
    I would love to read more.
    Andrix Lim´s last blog ..The Random Musings of an Attention-Seeking Author – 22/02/2010 My ComLuv Profile

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